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Michael - 2005-11-14 16:21:50
I like that. Worshipping the train as deity; it sure beats the sun or an imaginary invisible man who lives in the sky.
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iwombat - 2005-11-14 19:41:27
I think the train is only one of the myriad incarnations, incantations, innuendo, of a diety, of which, the sun is one of the better metaphors... did you hear about the guy who feeds, and has fed a monkey on his birthday every year since he was born? (like 36), some sort of yogi or someone told his parents it would bring good luck to the family if he did, he seems to enjoy it, sometimes it's been diffucult, living here in the states, but now there's a zoo that lets him.
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Alan - 2005-11-15 09:10:38
"As it tends to do, eventually", surely a metaphor for a Taoist approach to life. Would also make a good Gilbert O'Sullivan lyric.
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Baby Party - 2005-11-15 10:22:09
This poem would also work if it were entitled "Death Addresses the Straphangers." Yes, I had a difficult commute this morning, why do you ask?
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Paula - 2005-11-15 10:51:17
Ha!
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Michael - 2005-11-15 13:04:42
It still beats driving...
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